At first I though I didn't have any connections to the guy in my book but now that I look deeper I found a few. One way how we are both alike is we both hate it when kid notmuch older then you acts like there in charge of you. The reason i say this is in the story Charlie, the main character, goes to an academy called Bloors. At this school there are people who are in there last year that are prefect one of them's the son of the principal,his name is Manfred, he's really mean and he acts really arrogant. Some times my sisterdoze that some times and I hate it. When Charlie was small he lost his dad if this were ever happen I would never get over it I fell so bad for him. Charlie is endowed which I think is really cool, but for him it stink, because he has to go to that school called Bloors.
I think you should make it a little longer.
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